The line graph illustrates the proportion of tourists to England who attended four different attractions in Brighton.
The graph represents the number of tourists to England who visited several different attractions in Brighton from 1980 and 2010.
It is clear that
the most interesting attraction in 1980 was festival
and the least was Correct article usage
the festival
pier
. Correct article usage
the pier
However
, in 2010 pier climbed sharply and the art gallery was the least popular.
During the 1980s and 1995s pavilion fluctuated wildly from 25% to 49% and the trend was downward to 35% in 2010. Also
, visitors in
art Change preposition
to
gallery
increased rapidly from 22% to 38% from 1980 to 1985 Fix the agreement mistake
galleries
then
dropped to 9-8%.
According to
the graph percentage
of tourists who visited the Brighton Festival fluctuated slightly but in general remained stable at about 27 per cent. The period between 1980 and 2000 saw a vacillation in a pier Correct article usage
the percentage
then
it rose significantly from 13 per cent to 23 per cent between 2000 and 2010.Submitted by dnm.best on
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