Some people believe that employee should be hire with interviews. Other says that other types of method are better. Discuss both the views and give your opinion

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While
some people believe that
interview
is the most appropriate method for hiring employees, others assert that there are
alternatives
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ways. It seems to me that
interview
can directly
structinize
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scrutinize
the interviewers' characteristics and develop their's potential, so
therefore
, I agree with
this
statement. A group of people
supporting
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that there are other types of
method
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methods
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which are better than
interviews
,
such
as voting. Even though
this
way is more complicated than
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,
in other words
, it is
also
more
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for candidates. Voting required all
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staff
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in the department to decide
altogether
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,
this
can avoid situations
such
as personal discrimination or orientational
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.
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this
, Google's finance
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department
no longer
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employees via a small group of interviewers, but
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to be voted
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the whole
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department
, I believe the result is more convincing to persuade the candidates even
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is good or bad. The caveat is that
this
progress lack of professional perspective.
By contrast
, hiring
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interviews
can easily observe applicants'
personality
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personalities
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, which is the most important aspect. The system which hires by voting seems
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but
lack
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of exact experience, the more professional way is via
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interviews
. Examiners are able to inspect
while
asking specific questions in order to find out the
participents
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participant
possition
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position
. Their resumes may be written by others but
interview
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interviews
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can not rely on outsiders. In
this
case, examiners have the opportunity to find the one who they feel
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most reliable, and I believe through their professional eyes, each selection is the most perfect one. In conclusion, despite there
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some alternative ways can
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for
interviews
, I believe
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through
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interviews
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is the optimum choice. Ultimately,
interview
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can be one of the
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of
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applicants to find their dreamful jobs.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • traditional method
  • evaluate
  • interpersonal skills
  • judgement
  • communicate
  • body language
  • assess
  • qualifications
  • experience
  • screening
  • objective
  • subjective
  • bias
  • psychometric tests
  • group discussions
  • assessment centers
  • work samples
  • resume
  • cover letter
  • merit-based
  • potential
  • efficiency
  • effectiveness
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