The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between 2000 and 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The table shows the Proportions of Pupils Attending Four Secondary School Types Between 2000 and 2009.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
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The provided table gives data about the percentage of visiting different academies from 2000 to 2009.
Overall
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, at first glance,
it is clear that
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in community
schools
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at the end
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of the supplied period was the highest attendance,
whereas
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in specialist
schools
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it was the lowest.
Initially
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, during 2000 the most visits were in Voluntary-controlled
schools
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, just above that half,
while
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in Specialist and community
schools
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it was absolutely the same at around one in ten. At the same time, Grammar
schools
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ranked second with almost one-fourth. Between 2005 and 2009 years, in Specialist School's proportions of pupils attending slightly decreased to tens becoming the fewest in visits, meanwhile in Community
schools
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over the next 5 ,years it sharply increased to approximately a third and continued to go up in 2009 until just below that three in fifth, came at the top. Regarding the rest departments
such
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as Grammar and Voluntary-controlled, there
also
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were a sharp decline to 12% and one in fifth, respectively.
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