It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this opinion ? What sort punishments should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour for children?

Learning the difference between

right

and wrong is vital for

children

especially at an early age, because their character forms at

this

period. If

children

do the wrong behaviour,

parents

sometimes consider

punishment

to teach their

children

which

behaviors

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are correct or incorrect. I strongly believe that physical

punishment

is not a good way, and

parents

and

teachers

should find another way to show

children

the distinction between wrong and

right

. To commence, when

children

were born,

parents

are usually the first people that

children

learn good or bad deeds from them.

Parents

also

decide to punish their

children

at an early age, because they attempt to form

children’s

character.

In addition

,

Parents

’

punishment

causes

children

to feel depressed and worthless in society.

As a result

, these feelings can remain for them in the long run and impact

on

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children’s

future lives.

For instance

, my close friend told me, when she was a child, her father always punished her with a small tree branch, because she always broke her toys.

Therefore

, my friend always thinks that her father does not love her, and

she

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is not a beneficial member of her family. The type of

punishment

is a significant impact on

children’s

lives.

Parents

and

teachers

are always trying to not use physical

punishment

like beating

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children

with tools, they

also

endeavour to converse with

children

rather than using physical punishments. They

also

opine that by talking to

children

even at an early age, they can show the

right

way, and

children

can distinguish between wrong and

right

. If

parents

and

teachers

are not able to alter

children’s

behavior

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conversing, they can deny them to do their favourite activities.

Therefore

,

children

make more efforts to not repeat

their

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wrong

behavior

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, and they will become

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good

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of society. In conclusion,

although

teaching

children

which

behaviors

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are

right

or wrong is challenging, physical

punishment

cannot have a desirable effect on

children’s

behavior

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who do wrong actions.

Besides

this

,

parents

and

teachers

can have pivotal roles in changing

children’s

behavior

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by conversing and forbidding them to not do their favourite activities rather than punishing them with tools.