The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014.
The lines indicate three materials and their medium rate over every
month
in 2014.
In the first review, Nickel displays the highest fluctuation with the biggest gap with others in
6% and Change preposition
at
conversely
the lowest point at the end
at 1%. Meanwhile, the lowest point of all months happens in month
six too. Copper has less change over time
which is approximately the same amount at the beginning and the end with 2% and 1.5%. However
, Zinc
has just 1
% distance at the first and the end, but with moderate up and down.
Nickle after three months has a significant fall happens to 1%, Which is close to the start point of other materials, but copper is lower and at the same Correct article usage
a 1
time
, Zinc
grows by 3% in
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apply
this
time
. in the fifth month
all of them have an almost steady situation in order. The biggest decrease in the middle of Add a comma
,month
time
is shown for Nickel until -3%, however
, Zinc
has 2
% drop too. copper is stable and Correct article usage
a 2
after
this
vibration is in growth between 1 or 2 percent gap until the eleventh month
. Considering the distance in the sixth month
the pattern of movement for both Zinc
and Nick is nearly equal with the lasting gap. Finally
, last
month
all are closer to each other around 1% space.Submitted by fami on
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