Mrs. Barrett, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised for someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. write a letter to Mrs. barrettes your letter suggest how you could help her in her home Say why you would like to do this work Explain when you will and will not be available Dear Mrs Barrett,

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Dear Mrs Barrett, I hope

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letter finds you well. My name is Jun and I am

third-year

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a third-year

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college student, I am writing

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letter to express my interest in the advertisement that you posted on Facebook. Allow me to explain

about

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apply

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the situation.

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, my summer holiday is approaching and I will have a lot of leisure time to work in your place.

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, I am

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proficient in doing household chores because I live by myself and I am accustomed to

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doing

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them

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. Honestly, I am in urgent need of money to purchase a new laptop before the new semester because the old one seems doesn't

supporting

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support

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the latest software updates.

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, I need to earn extra income to make ends meet.

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, I will be available

working

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to work

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from Monday to Friday from 9 AM to 16 PM. Please don't hesitate to contact me via email

[email protected]

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at [email protected]

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or my mobile number +12 12345 for

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information. I am looking forward to your reply soon. Yours sincerely, Jun

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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

firstly
secondly
thirdly
in additional
moreover
also
for example
for instance
therefore
however
although
even though
despite

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

169 words

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