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You and your family are planning to spend a weekend at a seaside hotel. Write a letter to the hotel, making the arrangements. In your letter tell them when you will be arriving and leaving explain what type of rooms you would like, and ask how much the weekend will cost ask about activities and places of interest near the hotel

#weekend #hotel #arrangements #type #rooms #cost #activities #places #interest
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
 letter to reserve 3 rooms in your seaside hotel for
a
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 weekend of 12 and 13 August 2023. We would be arriving on the morning of August 12th around 9:00 AM and leaving on the evening of 13th August at 5 PM. We would like to book two sea-view Executive Rooms with queen beds and one Deluxe room with a king bed. I do acknowledge that the check-in and check-out times are 1:00 PM and 12:00 PM respectively, but we were hoping if you could provide us an early check-in and for checkout we can vacate the room on the checkout time but would just need your help to store our luggage till 5:00 PM. Concurrently, could you
also
 send us a list of activities and places to visit near the hotels
Lastly
, I would
also
 like to enquire what would be the cost of the aforementioned rooms for the weekend and are there any packages bundled with the activies. Looking forward to your positive response. Thanks and regards, John Doe
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Accommodation
  • Arrival and departure
  • Sea view
  • Family suite
  • Cost estimate
  • Activities and amenities
  • Water sports
  • Cultural sites
  • Natural attractions
  • Places of interest
  • Confirmation of booking
  • Warm regards
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