Some people feel that manufacturers and supermarkets should have the responsibility to reduce the amount of packaging of goods, while others argue that customers should avoid buying goods with a lot of packaging. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays,
handful
of people believe that Add an article
a handful
manufactures
and supermarkets should have the responsibility to decrease the amount of packaging of products, Correct your spelling
manufacturers
however
there still
some people Add a missing verb
are still
think
that consumers shouldn't Correct pronoun usage
who think
purchasing
Change the verb form
purchase
be purchasing
stuffs
with a Change the wording
stuff
kinds of stuff
pieces of stuff
lot
of packaging. In this
essay, I will discuss about
both perspectives and Remove the preposition
apply
also
my opinion to
the statements.
First of all, manufacturers and supermarkets should reduce packaging for their products because it is Change preposition
of
danger
for the environment, Replace the word
dangerous
as a result
of
to produce a Change preposition
apply
package
we need to use a lot
of energy which lead
to the waste of sources and Correct subject-verb agreement
leads
the
fossil fuel emissions. Correct article usage
apply
For instance
, the
greenhouse gasses tend to enhance Correct article usage
apply
due to
the manufactory which can harm the habitats of animals such
as ice melting, forest
fires. Correct word choice
and forest
Instead
we can use some materials that eco - friendly Add a comma
Instead,
such
as paper and simplistically the designs of the packages.
In contrast
, customers should avoid consuming stuffs
with a Change the wording
stuff
kinds of stuff
pieces of stuff
lot
of packaging because majority
of the Add an article
the majority
a majority
package
is made from plastic which need
a long time to Change the verb form
needs
decomposition
. So Replace the word
decompose
as
the same time we buy things Change preposition
at
within
a Change preposition
in
lot
of package
, we Change to a plural noun
packages
also
get involve
Change the form of the verb
involved
to destroy
our environment which Change preposition
in destroying
lead
to Change the verb form
leads
unsustainable
future. Correct article usage
an unsustainable
For instance
, some travelers tend to throw the packages to the lake or ocean which is the contributor to the water pollution.
In conclusion, both
customers and manufacturers, supermarkets need to have Change preposition
for both
responsibility
to reduce producing and purchasing goods with a Add an article
a responsibility
the responsibility
lot
of packaging by aware people about
the disadvantages of Change preposition
of
package
and Add an article
the package
a package
also
use
materials that Wrong verb form
using
friendly
to the environment.Add a missing verb
are friendly
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