The maps below show the changes in a town after the construction of a hydroelectric power dam.

The maps below show the changes in a town after the construction of a hydroelectric power dam.
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The maps illustrate what the layout of a local area looked like before and after a hydroelectric power dam was erected in 2010.
It is clear that
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there are various striking transformations. All of these
such
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as the removal of forest and the appearance of a hotel
as well as
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some power plants make the town become more modern. As can be seen, in 1990, a river was situated in the middle of the town from the north to the south. On the left side of it, there was an ancient-architecture building and a forest which was the habitat for numerous rare animals
together with
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plants. On the opposite side, irrigated farmlands
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villages were located between ranges of mountains. In 2010, as a dam was constructed crossing the river, a human-made lake was erected in the north.
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, a hotel appeared in the eastern part of the region to meet people's needs.
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the river was still in its old position, the farmlands on the right and those eco-friendly parts on the left were removed.
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, a number of power plants were installed on either side of the flow.
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