The chart below shows the value of one country's exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given bar chart and table graph represent information on income from different export categories and each category’s changes in
value
in a particular country, between 2015 and 2016.
Overall
, petroleum products
were on
the top of the league table in both years, Change preposition
at
as well as
engineered goods, however
value
of textiles increased gradually by 2016.
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the value
According to
the bar graph, the highest income in the whole period was from petrolium
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petroleum
products
, making up nearly 65 billion
$. Engineered goods are on
Change preposition
in
the
second place, considering slightly more than 60 Correct article usage
apply
billion
$, even though, in 2015, it scored about 55 billion
$. Likewise
, earnings from exporting textile
increased during the period from 25 to 30 Fix the agreement mistake
textiles
billion
$. However
, agricultural products
and gems and jewellery remained the same, considering roughly 30 billion
$ and 40 billion
$, respectively.
Turning to the table graph, petrolium
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petroleum
products
’ value
, which was on
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in
the
first place, increased only Correct article usage
apply
for
3%. Change preposition
by
Although
, engineered goods value
raised for
8.5% by 2016. Change preposition
by
Similarly
, the value
of textiles went up considerably, for
15.24%. Agricultural Change preposition
by
products
increased only
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by only
for
0.81%. But gems and jewellery, Change preposition
apply
on the other hand
, decreased for
5.18%Change preposition
by
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