The chart below shows the value of one country’s exports in various categories during 2015 and 2016. The table shows the percentage change in each category of exports in 2016 compared with 2015.
While
the given graph indicates the amount of income that a particular country could achieve by exporting specific products
from 2015 to 2016, the below table illustrates the exact number of changes that happened in the exportation of five types of goods during this
time frame.
Overall
, over this
mentioned period of time
the value of four categories of these exports experienced a growing trend, namely Add a comma
,time
petroluem
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petroleum
products
, engineered goods, textiles and agricultural products
, while
the amount
of gems and jewellery exportation reduced.
Change the quantifier
number
To begin
, petroleum products
had been exported more in 2016 compared with 2015, an increase of 3%. Moreover
, the exportation of textiles and engineering goods had the most significant growth among these pointed out
items respectively by 15.24% and 8.5%. The value of agricultural Add a hyphen
pointed-out
products
exports was almost identical at approximately 30 billion. Furthermore
, the value of gems and jewellery exports reduced by about 5% over this
period of time.Submitted by m.v.g1371 on
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