The graph shows children by age group as a percentage of the young population in the United Kingdom between 1990 and 2001.

The graph shows children by age group as a percentage of the young population in the United Kingdom between 1990 and 2001.
The provided chart illustrates the proportion of British children as per the
age
stages among 12 years of population rate.
Overall
, it is evident that across the chart there is a dramatic variation between the beginning of the
period
and the end of the
period
.
To begin
with,
while
the oldest
age
stage 15-19 reported the highest percentage
at
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1990 and recorded just over 26%, they recorded a dramatic decline over the chart.
However
, the lowest
age
group
10-14 showed roughly 23%
at
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1990, and climbed gradually to reach the highest peak
at the end
of the
period
.
Conversely
, the lowest percentage
at the end
of the
period
was given to the youngest aged 0-4 when boasted nearly under 24%.
Furthermore
, the
age
group
5-9 demonstrated a slight steadiness in comparison with other groups
whereas
provided at 1990 proportion just under 25%,
this
group
showed a constant marginal increase but again decreased in 2001 to meet with the
age
group
15-19 almost at 25%.
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