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Nowadays, not enough students choose science subjects in university in many countries. What are the reasons for this problem? What are the effect on the society?

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It is important To think about why many learners are Preferring to study other subjects in school rather than learning
science
. in
this
 essay. I will delve into the reasons why
students
are not opt
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 to study
science
 and its consequences on society. First of all,the
Science
 Taught today in several schools is irrelevant and outdated Curricula.
Furthermore
,most teachers
had
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given the responsibility to teach
this
 subject are not interested in it. Which
consequently
 forms a weak base for
students
.
Also
,
science
 is a hard subject
which
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 you require great mental and intellectual ability.
In addition
, white-coated not well-paid lab
scientists
Does
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 not form
a
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role model for pupils Unlike highly paid actors, singers and football Stars, which get high salaries and global recognition.
Also
, there are other jobs that pay high
salary
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 like lawyers and individuals who work in media.
For instance
, If a junior footballer gets a monthly wage of 10,000 Egyptian pounds the scientist would obtain half of
this
 salary. The lack of interest in
science
 Will
subsequently
 decrease the number of
scientists
 which can be deteriorative To society, as everything today, depends on technology and to innovate and update automation. We need people who can develop the latest technique in technology and without
scientists
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 societies will stagnate In conclusion, it can be reiterated that it is indeed
students
 who have lost their interest in
science
 which is bad for the globe . and we need to solve
this
 problem by providing better salaries for
Scientists
 And better education for
students
. To avoid the unwanted results which may occur.
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