You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts below show reasons why people left the UK for other countries and why people stayed in the UK. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
These two pie charts illustrate the five causes of
people
who stayed in the UK
or left the UK
for other countries.
In sum, the majority of reason for people
to leave or stay in the UK
was the same. However
, it is also
noticeable that the second concern for
those who were different.
Add a missing verb
was for
People
were more likely to stay in the UK
since join families and friends, this
was the same reason for those who left the UK
, with a percentage of 39% and 34%, respectively. However
, 24% of the proportion of people
choose to leave the UK
since the weather, which was the second priority compared with other reasons. 28% of the proportion of people
considered work setting which ranked second for the reasons that people
staying in the UK
.
Financial reasons and taxation were not really taken considered by people
whether they staying or leaving in the UK
, which value was below 11%.Submitted by yqchen2023 on
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words people, uk with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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