The table below shows the proportion of different categories of families living in poverty in Australia in 1999.

The table below shows the proportion of different categories of  families living in poverty in Australia in 1999.
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The table gives information about
poverty
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rates among six types of
household
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households
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in Australia in the year 1999. It is noticeable that levels of
poverty
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were higher for single
people
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than for couples, and
people
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with children were more likely to be poor than those without.
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rates were considerably lower among elderly
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.
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, 11% of Australians, or 1,837,000
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, were living in
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in 1999. Aged
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were the least likely to be poor, with
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levels of 6% and 4% for
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people
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and aged couples respectively. Just over
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of single parents were living in
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,
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only 12% of parents living with a partner were classed as poor. The same pattern can be seen for
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with no children:
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19% of single
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in
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group were living below the
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line, the figure for couples was much lower, at only 7%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words poverty, people with synonyms.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • categories
  • families
  • poverty
  • single-parent
  • childcare
  • income
  • couples
  • dependents
  • older adults
  • pensions
  • unemployed
  • financial resources
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