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how does the map describe the change of village park ?

how does the map describe the change of village park ?
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The display maps describe the update that took place in village parks. The data about before and after is explained below.
Firstly
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, the maps before 10 years ago there is a Tennis court, a car
park
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 with 20 people, in the centre there is a football pitch. There is
also
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 a pound and wood. There is even a small children's play area. In the village
park
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 now, there is a tennis court and a car
park
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 with 50 people. A football pitch, picnic area and a boating lake and cafe. Kids
park
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 and kids area is very much near to each other. There is a long cycle path.
However
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, there is a get growth seen in both parks. There is
a
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great development in both the
park
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. The data is about ten years now.
To conclude
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, in the diagram, there are too many facilities compared to others. The above information gives a brief idea about the
park
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Vocabulary: Replace the words park with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 3 times.
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