The charts below show what UK graduate and postgraduate students who did not go into full-time work did after leaving college in 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar charts compare the amount of bachelor’s and master’s graduate pupils who refused to apply for full-time
work
after graduation in England in 2008.
It is noted that the category of further
study is mostly UK
graduates
who have chosen, both master's and bachelor one, for the reason that, to not willing to become full-time workers in the year 2008 in the United Kingdom (UK
). By contrast
, the reason for doing voluntary work
is the least choice that they have chosen .
Around 3 million UK
university graduates
have planned to have further
studies, and those who chose to work
at part-time jobs and suffered from unemployment were reduced to half of the highest one, at approximately 1.8 and 1.6 million students
. Working for voluntary work
is the least, only around 3500 pupils choose this
reason.
For the master graduates
, same as the UK
bachelor graduates
, the highest category (around 2800 students
) is the young individuals who choose to further
study. Following by the ones who chose to work
for a part-time job, at probably 2500 students
, only slightly less than around 200 students
compared to the ones in further
study. Other choices which for unemployment and voluntary work
, are both below 2,000 UK
students
to choose for the reasons in explaining why they did not work
for full-time.Submitted by sharon021082 on
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