The graphs below show the number of men and women in full and part-time employment in Australia between 1973 and 1993.

The four line graphs illustrate the percentage of full and part-time

employment

of both genders in different age groups in Australia between 1973 and 1993. There were 90% and 80% of

males

who aged 20 to 50 years old worked

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full-time in 1973 and 1993 respectively.

By contrast

, the percentage of part-time

males

dropped significantly over 20-year-olds in 1973 and 1993.

However

, About 10% of elderly

males

tended to

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a part-time job in 1973. Two decades later, the percentage dropped to 5%. When it came to females, it is worth

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that there were peaks in the line graph of full-time females at age 20. More than half go the women had full-time jobs when they were 20 years old.

In addition

, both full and part-time

employment

rates in 1973 and 1993 share similar patterns. There was a negative relationship between the full-time

employment

rates of women and their ages.

Also

, part-time employees were teenagers of both genders and women aged 25 to 50.

Overall

, the line graphs displayed

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growth in all rates during

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decades, except for the full-time

employment

rate of men.

Although

more

males

were employed full-time in Australia, females participated in

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part-time

employment

.