The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevan

The pie charts below show the percentage of time working adults spent on different activities in a particular country in 1958 and 2008. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevan
The illustration presents the data on activities that grown-ups spent in their daily life in a particular country between 1958 and 2008.
Overall
, most of the adults consumed their
time
working and sleeping in both years. Half of the categories showed a significant increase in their percentage. In 50 years, the proportion of
time
spent on working displayed remarkable change, it was originally 33% but expanded by 9 percentage points to 42%
at the end
of 2008.
On the other hand
, the part of adults who waste their
time
sleeping went down, from taking nearly one-third space in the pie chart to a quarter. In terms of going out with families or friends and travelling to work, they
also
appeared to be changed significantly. The portion of
time
used for going out dropped to half of it,
whereas
wandering to work grew four times more.
However
, only the proportion of other activities
such
as hobbies and playing sports remain unchanged throughout the half of a century.
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