The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant.
This
bar chart provides information on
electricity
production and consumption in 10 countries during 2014. It is evident that China and the United States were the highest in both production and consumption,
while
the other countries had similar amounts. Germany was the only country where
electricity
usage exceeded the amount generated. China was the leading country in both creating and using
electricity
, producing 5,398
billion
kWh
and consuming 5,322
billion
kWh
. The United States was the second-highest producer and consumer with 4,099
billion
kWh
and 3,866
billion
kWh
, respectively. Russia was third on the list, generating and using almost 1000
billion
kWh
each. The remaining countries, Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, Germany, and the Republic of Korea, all had a proportion of under one thousand
billion
kWh
in both sections. Germany was the only country where the amount of
electricity
consumed exceeded the amount generated, consuming 582.5
billion
kWh
and generating 526.6
billion
kWh
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • electricity production
  • electricity consumption
  • disparity
  • significant
  • top ten countries
  • main features
  • compare
  • relevant
  • geographical concentration
  • trends
  • patterns
  • implications
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