The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features , and make comparisons where relevant.
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This
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bar chart provides information on
electricity
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production and consumption in 10 countries during 2014. It is evident that China and the United States were the highest in both production and consumption,
while
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the other countries had similar amounts. Germany was the only country where
electricity
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usage exceeded the amount generated. China was the leading country in both creating and using
electricity
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, producing 5,398
billion
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kWh
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and consuming 5,322
billion
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kWh
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. The United States was the second-highest producer and consumer with 4,099
billion
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kWh
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and 3,866
billion
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kWh
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, respectively. Russia was third on the list, generating and using almost 1000
billion
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kWh
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each. The remaining countries, Japan, India, Canada, France, Brazil, Germany, and the Republic of Korea, all had a proportion of under one thousand
billion
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kWh
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in both sections. Germany was the only country where the amount of
electricity
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consumed exceeded the amount generated, consuming 582.5
billion
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kWh
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and generating 526.6
billion
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kWh
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.
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  • electricity consumption
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  • top ten countries
  • main features
  • compare
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  • geographical concentration
  • trends
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