The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
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The bar chart shows how much
electricity
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in terms of
production
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and consumption allocate to ten
countries
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in the year 2014.
Overall
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, China accounts for the biggest amount of
electricity
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, followed by the United States in both
sections
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of
production
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and consumption in billion
kWh
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.
However
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, these figures for the remaining
countries
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illustrate a significant
difference
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compared to the two
countries
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that have just been mentioned. The
figure
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for the intaking and
production
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of
electricity
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in China was almost 5300 billion
kWh
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and
also
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this
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country ranked first in both
sections
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.
In contrast
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, the
figure
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for both
sections
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in the Republic of Korea was approximately 450 billion
kWh
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and it had the
last
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rank.
Moreover
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, there is a wide disparity between the
figure
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for
production
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and usage of
electricity
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in the United States with almost 130
Kwh
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, the
figure
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for the former was about 4100. Russia ranked third with the minimum
difference
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between consumption and
production
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of
electricity
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by a margin of 19
Kwh
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,
whereas
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the maximum
difference
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between the two
sections
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allocated to India with 170
kWh
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while
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the
production
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was 871
kWh
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. The remaining
countries
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like Japan, Brazil, Canada, France, and Germany experienced a considerable
difference
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between the
production
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and intaking of
electricity
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but not as much importance as others.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 86%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, production, countries, sections, kwh, difference, figure with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • megawatt-hours (MWh)
  • electricity grid
  • renewable energy sources
  • fossil fuels
  • energy efficiency
  • consumption patterns
  • power generation
  • industrial demand
  • residential use
  • transmission losses
  • energy imports
  • sustainability
  • carbon footprint
  • energy policy
  • capacity
  • infrastructure
  • demand and supply
  • electrification
  • energy security
  • grid reliability
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