The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.

The bar chart below shows the top ten countries for the production and consumption of electricity in 2014.
The bar chart shows how much
electricity
in terms of
production
and consumption allocate to ten
countries
in the year 2014.
Overall
, China accounts for the biggest amount of
electricity
, followed by the United States in both
sections
of
production
and consumption in billion
kWh
.
However
, these figures for the remaining
countries
illustrate a significant
difference
compared to the two
countries
that have just been mentioned. The
figure
for the intaking and
production
of
electricity
in China was almost 5300 billion
kWh
and
also
this
country ranked first in both
sections
.
In contrast
, the
figure
for both
sections
in the Republic of Korea was approximately 450 billion
kWh
and it had the
last
rank.
Moreover
, there is a wide disparity between the
figure
for
production
and usage of
electricity
in the United States with almost 130
Kwh
, the
figure
for the former was about 4100. Russia ranked third with the minimum
difference
between consumption and
production
of
electricity
by a margin of 19
Kwh
,
whereas
the maximum
difference
between the two
sections
allocated to India with 170
kWh
while
the
production
was 871
kWh
. The remaining
countries
like Japan, Brazil, Canada, France, and Germany experienced a considerable
difference
between the
production
and intaking of
electricity
but not as much importance as others.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words electricity, production, countries, sections, kwh, difference, figure with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 4 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • megawatt-hours (MWh)
  • electricity grid
  • renewable energy sources
  • fossil fuels
  • energy efficiency
  • consumption patterns
  • power generation
  • industrial demand
  • residential use
  • transmission losses
  • energy imports
  • sustainability
  • carbon footprint
  • energy policy
  • capacity
  • infrastructure
  • demand and supply
  • electrification
  • energy security
  • grid reliability
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