Your workplace does not have a parking area for cars, and it is causing some problems. Write a letter to your manager and include the following: – Describe the problems it has caused. – Explain what benefits a parking area would bring to the company. – Suggest a solution

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Dear Sir, I am writing
this
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letter to inform you that our working employee has been facing a problem
of
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with
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car
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parking. By
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, many of them come late
on
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for
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the
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work.
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, some of my colleagues got tickets from the police because they parked their cars on the side of the
roads
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. I remember,
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week, Mohit who is working in the HR department faced a serious accident
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he was parking his
car
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in the public lot. The first and foremost benefit of
the
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car
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parking is
to
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easy access to find a space and employees will reach on time without finding any delay. So, they will save their time and money by having a
our
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private
car
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working in the workplace. It would be worth it if you will think to renovate
old
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the old
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parking lot by clearing grass and adding an extra space in the old parking area.
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, both our employees and the company will get more benefits
by
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this
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and even our dealer will be happy with
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. yours faithfully, Justin Trudeau
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • inconveniences
  • designated
  • punctuality
  • productivity
  • enhanced
  • potential
  • demonstrates
  • acquiring
  • vacant
  • arranging
  • agreement
  • implementing
  • shuttle service
  • encouraging
  • carpooling
  • incentives
  • subsidies
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