Your workplace does not have a parking area for cars, and it is causing some problems. Write a letter to your manager and include the following: – Describe the problems it has caused. – Explain what benefits a parking area would bring to the company. – Suggest a solution

Dear Sir, I am writing
this
letter to inform you that our working employee has been facing a problem
of
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car
parking. By
this
, many of them come late
on
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the
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work.
Furthermore
, some of my colleagues got tickets from the police because they parked their cars on the side of the
roads
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. I remember,
last
week, Mohit who is working in the HR department faced a serious accident
while
he was parking his
car
in the public lot. The first and foremost benefit of
the
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car
parking is
to
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easy access to find a space and employees will reach on time without finding any delay. So, they will save their time and money by having a
our
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private
car
working in the workplace. It would be worth it if you will think to renovate
old
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parking lot by clearing grass and adding an extra space in the old parking area.
Hence
, both our employees and the company will get more benefits
by
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this
and even our dealer will be happy with
this
. yours faithfully, Justin Trudeau
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  • potential
  • demonstrates
  • acquiring
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  • agreement
  • implementing
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