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Writing task 1 The graph below shows the percentage of river water in the UK that is of good chemical quality, in the period between 1990 and 2002.

Writing task 1 The graph below shows the percentage of river water in the UK that is of good chemical quality, in the period between 1990 and 2002.
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The given line graph illustrates the proportion of
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water
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quality
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 in the UK from 1990 to 2002.
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, rivers that were located in Wales and North Ireland had the best chemical
quality
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 in the given period.
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,
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 in England and Scotland had an upward trend with sharp fluctuations. As can be seen, the percentage of
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 in Wales stood roughly the same at approximately 95% between 1990 and 1998.
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, the figure for Northern Ireland levelled out at 85%. In the subsequent year, the proportion of
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 in Wales and Northern Ireland reached 80% and 95% respectively in 2002.
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, the percentage of
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 in England increased marginally from 45% to just under 70% in the first 6 years. Over the next 2 years, it saw a sharp decline to 30%. After which, there is a growth in the figure of that of until 2002. T is
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 worth noting that
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 in Scotland was 30% in 1992 which was nearly 8% more than in 1990. From that year until 2006 remained at 30%. The figure for it went up by approximately 30% in 2000 followed by a rapid decrease to 40% in the latest year.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words river, water, quality with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "approximately" was used 2 times.
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