Task 1: The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The pie chart displays after graduating from the Anthropology degree course students after completing one university
as well as
the table provides information on the salaries after five years of experience of Anthropology Linking Words
graduates
.
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Overall
, more than half per cent of Linking Words
graduates
did full-time Use synonyms
jobs
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whereas
some students are doing part-time Linking Words
work
and even some are unemployed. Use synonyms
However
, the Government sector is the highest salary reaching more than $100,000 Linking Words
while
the least to reach Linking Words
this
salary are the Private companies and the second one are the freelance consultants.
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Graduates
of Anthropology after completing the undergraduate degree chose various paths more than 50% of students are doing full-time Use synonyms
work
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while
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graduates
between 10% to 15% who are either doing part-time Use synonyms
jobs
or are unemployed. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Below 10% of Linking Words
graduates
are doing part-time Use synonyms
work
with their postgraduation studies or they chose to do full-time postgraduate study and Use synonyms
then
there are Linking Words
graduates
who don't know what they are doing.
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Furthermore
, after 5 years of Linking Words
work
in a specific field, there are different salaries. Those who did freelance consultant Use synonyms
jobs
could expect some rapid salary growth. Other than that government sector Use synonyms
jobs
salaries are quite linear Use synonyms
whereas
the private companies pay scale is fluctuating.Linking Words
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas, while".
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words graduates, jobs, work with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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