Task 1: The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

Task 1: The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university

did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries

of the anthropologists in work after five years. Summarize the information by

selecting and reporting the main features and make comparison where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
The pie chart displays after graduating from the Anthropology degree course students after completing one university
as well as
the table provides information on the salaries after five years of experience of Anthropology
graduates
.
Overall
, more than half per cent of
graduates
did full-time
jobs
whereas
some students are doing part-time
work
and even some are unemployed.
However
, the Government sector is the highest salary reaching more than $100,000
while
the least to reach
this
salary are the Private companies and the second one are the freelance consultants.
Graduates
of Anthropology after completing the undergraduate degree chose various paths more than 50% of students are doing full-time
work
while
there are
graduates
between 10% to 15% who are either doing part-time
jobs
or are unemployed.
Moreover
, Below 10% of
graduates
are doing part-time
work
with their postgraduation studies or they chose to do full-time postgraduate study and
then
there are
graduates
who don't know what they are doing.
Furthermore
, after 5 years of
work
in a specific field, there are different salaries. Those who did freelance consultant
jobs
could expect some rapid salary growth. Other than that government sector
jobs
salaries are quite linear
whereas
the private companies pay scale is fluctuating.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas, while".
Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
Vocabulary: Replace the words graduates, jobs, work with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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