Your local public library wants to make improvements to their services and facilities. In order to get ideas from the public, they have asked library users to send them suggestions in writing. Write a letter to the librarian. In your letter -describe what you like about the library - say what you don’t like - make suggestions for improvements.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am one of your regular customers and I am writing this
letter to give my suggestion regarding how to improve your library
services and facilities.
Let me elaborate on the situations
. Fix the agreement mistake
situation
Firstly
, I enjoy your current services because you provide variety
of books compared to other libraries, not solely education books but Add an article
a variety
also
entertainment books. In addition
, the computer room is one of my favorite
Change the spelling
favourite
place
to read because the room is spacious.
Fix the agreement mistake
places
Furthermore
, there are some unpleasant experiences when I visit your library
, the place is inconvenient to study because inadequate
tables, so I have to seat on the floor. Change preposition
of inadequate
Furthermore
, the library
working hours is
too short only Correct subject-verb agreement
are
start
from 9 am to 16 pm. Wrong verb form
starting
Therfore
,as a student I have to rush to your Correct your spelling
Therefore
library
to borrow the book.
I kindly suggest you to
add more seats for people to read. Remove the particle
apply
Additionally
, I greatly appreciate if
you can Correct pronoun usage
it if
extent
the opening hours from 8 am to 18 pm.
Thank you for considering my idea and I am looking forward to your reply.
Yours sincerely,
JunReplace the word
extend
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite