Your local public library wants to make improvements to their services and facilities. In order to get ideas from the public, they have asked library users to send them suggestions in writing. Write a letter to the librarian. In your letter -describe what you like about the library - say what you don’t like - make suggestions for improvements.

Dear Sir or Madam, I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am one of your regular customers and I am writing
this
letter to give my suggestion regarding how to improve your
library
services and facilities. Let me elaborate on the
situations
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situation
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.
Firstly
, I enjoy your current services because you provide
variety
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of books compared to other libraries, not solely education books but
also
entertainment books.
In addition
, the computer room is one of my
favorite
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place
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places
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to read because the room is spacious.
Furthermore
, there are some unpleasant experiences when I visit your
library
, the place is inconvenient to study because
inadequate
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tables, so I have to seat on the floor.
Furthermore
, the
library
working hours
is
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too short only
start
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starting
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from 9 am to 16 pm.
Therfore
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Therefore
,as a student I have to rush to your
library
to borrow the book. I kindly suggest you
to
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add more seats for people to read.
Additionally
, I greatly appreciate
if
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you can
extent
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extend
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the opening hours from 8 am to 18 pm. Thank you for considering my idea and I am looking forward to your reply. Yours sincerely, Jun
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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You are not ready for IELTS Speaking, if you

  • Can’t speak smoothly without pauses.
  • Use simple words and lack vocabulary.
  • Feel nervous and anxious when speaking.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • extensive collection
  • resourceful
  • helpful staff
  • friendly assistance
  • tranquil atmosphere
  • comfortable environment
  • limited operating hours
  • restricted access
  • insufficient study spaces
  • quiet spot
  • extend the hours
  • accommodate
  • private study rooms
  • cater
  • digital resources
  • e-books
  • audiobooks
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