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The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries, and the pie chart shows the percentages of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows the number of books that were borrowed in four different months in 2014 from four village libraries, and the pie chart shows the percentages of books, by type, that were borrowed over this time. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The supplied line graph provides information about the
number
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 of
books
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 borrowed among different libraries in the period of 4 months (2014).
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 Sutton Wood Village Library led the way in borrowing
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 compared to other libraries. From June to July, the
number
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 of
books
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 borrowed from Reslip stood at 300 and
then
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 decreased steadily and reached 250.
In contrast
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, the
number
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 of
books
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 borrowed from Sutton Wood increased moderately from 250 to approximately 270 in the first two months of the covered period. It should be mentioned that the count of
books
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 borrowed from West Eaton and Church Mount village libraries stood at 50 and raised gradually to around 105 from June to July. In the following months,
although
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 the figure for Sutton Wood had an upward trend, the
number
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 of borrowing
books
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 plunged from around 270 to 100 in August and
then
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 rocketed to 300 by the end of the period. The figures
og
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of
 West Eaton and Church Mount experienced an upward trend and reached 150 in September. Reyeslip Village library
also
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 dropped steadily and reached
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250 in June to around 170 in September.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, books with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "trend" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stood" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 3 times.
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