ou should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion? Write at least 250 words

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Evarybody
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Everybody
knows that
Tv
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on and
computer
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so
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are so
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common in people's
live
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lives
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. Many
person
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people
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from weka
to
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apply
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up
untill
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until
sleeping time use
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computer
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a computer
the computer
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or
waoching
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watching
Tv
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.
that
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That
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being the case; no
one
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can not tell,
tv
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and
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computer's
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computer
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game
not
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do not
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affet
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affect
on our
life
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.
Absolutuly
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Absolutely
,
i
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I
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disagree about it, it is
effeck
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effect
on the
life
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too much.
This
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essey
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essay
can be explanted several examples. First,
tv
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program
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programs
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and
games
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of
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computer
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computers
show examples
can change our
moody
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mood
show examples
,
hormany
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hormones
, and ideas. İt
esplented
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splendid
many times.
For example
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,
this
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is
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a thrue
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thrue
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the
true
story. everyone knows who
are
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is
show examples
from
turkey
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Turkey
show examples
and
live
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lives
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there, in
turkey
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Turkey
show examples
had
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a
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very
populer
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popular
movis
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movies
moves
,
it
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its
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name is Kurtlar Vadisi and about
mefia
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media
mafia
moves. There had be many bad
sempels
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samples
for children
an
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and
show examples
adult
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adults
show examples
in the
movia
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movie
. Even
one
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day,
one
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polis and his
friand
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friend
show examples
move the moved together
then
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they
effet
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effect
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from the
moviss
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movies
and
begin
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tobegin
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fight
ech
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each
others
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other
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. Some reachers
meked
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make
that time and the reachers
slution
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solution
is
verry
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very
common violence after the move.
On the other hand
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, there
is
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are
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many
bennefits
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benefits
movis
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movies
moves
in
the
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apply
show examples
Tv
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life
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who
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that
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give you many
informatation
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information
and what you
wnat
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want
learn benefit
thinds
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things
. Second,
games
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of
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on
show examples
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computer
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computers
show examples
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are verry
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verry
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very
common
betwin
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between
childrens
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children
show examples
. They can spend
tme
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time
the
vey
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very
funny.
However
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, there are many bad
games
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in
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on
show examples
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computer
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computers
show examples
. They can
effect
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affect
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childrians
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children's
children
life
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.
For instance
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, there is
one
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populer
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popular
game
that
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is name
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is named
show examples
Killing the
man
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Man
show examples
. Many
chelrean
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children
kill
theri
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their
there
feriand
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friends
friend
and family who play the game.
On the other hand
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, have
a
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apply
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many
games
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wich
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which
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can learn new
languach
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language
languages
, helping lessons ( because some lessons very
borring
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boring
for the
chelren
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children
,
it
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they
show examples
make funney
by
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of
show examples
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games
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the games
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) or devalop
theri
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their
there
life
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.
To sum up
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,
that is
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in your hand,
person
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a person
the person
show examples
can use it benefit way or
other
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another
show examples
way.
The
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Life
show examples
life
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of
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on
show examples
tv
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or
games
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of
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on
show examples
Use synonyms
computer
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the computer
show examples
is
vriy
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very
big, you can find there
everythings
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everything
what
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that
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you want. İn my opinion, we should use it because we live
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in eletronic
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eletronic
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electronic
and modern
time
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times
show examples
. We couldn't live without
they
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them
show examples
.
bisecly
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bicycle
, we
shuld
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should
it with
countrol
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control
controls
for children or
teenegers
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teenagers
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Media violence
  • Societal damage
  • Desensitization
  • Aggression
  • Imitation
  • Personal responsibility
  • Fantasy vs. reality
  • Conclusive evidence
  • Behavioral impact
  • Psychological effects
  • Content regulation
  • Parental guidance
  • Censorship
  • Ethical consideration
  • Moral compass
  • Violent tendencies
  • Causal relationship
  • Empirical research
  • Social responsibility
  • Critical analysis
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