ou should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Some people believe that violence on television and in computer games has a damaging effect on the society. Others deny that these factors have any significant influence on people's behaviour. What is your opinion? Write at least 250 words
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knows that Correct your spelling
Everybody
Tv
on and computer
so
common in people's Add a missing verb
are so
live
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lives
person
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people
to
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apply
untill
sleeping time use Correct your spelling
until
computer
or Add an article
a computer
the computer
waoching
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watching
Tv
. that
being the case; no Capitalize word
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one
can not tell, tv
and computer's
game Change noun form
computer
not
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do not
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on our Correct your spelling
affect
life
. Absolutuly
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Absolutely
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disagree about it, it is Change the capitalization
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on the Correct your spelling
effect
life
too much. This
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can be explanted several examples.
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essay
tv
program
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programs
games
of computer
can change our Fix the agreement mistake
computers
moody
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mood
hormany
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hormones
esplented
many times. Correct your spelling
splendid
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a thrue
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the
true
are
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is
turkey
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lives
turkey
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a
populer
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popular
movis
, Correct your spelling
movies
moves
it
name is Kurtlar Vadisi and about Change the pronoun
its
mefia
moves. There had be many bad Correct your spelling
media
mafia
sempels
for children Correct your spelling
samples
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and
adult
in the Fix the agreement mistake
adults
movia
. Even Correct your spelling
movie
one
day, one
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move the moved together Correct your spelling
friend
then
they effet
from the Correct your spelling
effect
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and Correct your spelling
movies
begin
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tobegin
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each
others
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make
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common violence after the move. Correct your spelling
very
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many Change the verb form
are
bennefits
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benefits
movis
in Correct your spelling
movies
moves
the
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apply
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life
who
give you many Correct pronoun usage
that
informatation
and what you Correct your spelling
information
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learn benefit Correct your spelling
want
thinds
.
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things
games
of
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on
computer
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computers
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are verry
verry
common Correct your spelling
very
betwin
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between
childrens
. They can spend Correct your spelling
children
tme
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time
the
vey
funny. Correct your spelling
very
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, there are many bad games
in
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on
computer
. They can Fix the agreement mistake
computers
effect
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affect
childrians
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children's
children
life
. For instance
, there is one
populer
game Correct your spelling
popular
that
is name
Killing the Change the verb form
is named
man
. Many Capitalize word
Man
chelrean
kill Correct your spelling
children
theri
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their
there
feriand
and family who play the game. Correct your spelling
friends
friend
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, have a
many Correct article usage
apply
games
wich
can learn new Correct your spelling
which
languach
, helping lessons ( because some lessons very Correct your spelling
language
languages
borring
for the Correct your spelling
boring
chelren
, Correct your spelling
children
it
make funney Correct pronoun usage
they
by
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of
games
) or devalop Correct article usage
the games
theri
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their
there
life
.
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, that is
in your hand, person
can use it benefit way or Add an article
a person
the person
other
way. Change the wording
another
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Life
life
of
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on
tv
or games
of
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on
computer
is Correct article usage
the computer
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big, you can find there Correct your spelling
very
everythings
Correct your spelling
everything
what
you want. İn my opinion, we should use it because we live Correct word choice
that
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in eletronic
eletronic
and modern Correct your spelling
electronic
time
. We couldn't live without Fix the agreement mistake
times
they
. Change the pronoun
them
bisecly
, we Correct your spelling
bicycle
shuld
it with Correct your spelling
should
countrol
for children orCorrect your spelling
control
controls
teenegers
.Correct your spelling
teenagers
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