In the future, people may no longer be able to pay for things in shops using cash. All payments may have to be made by card or using phones. Do you think this will happen one day? Why do you think some people might not be happy to give up using cash?

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modern era, everyone
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technological
gagets
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gadgets
. In the next coming days ,
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everything
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which we buy at shops will
be totally replace
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with
card
payment
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and
cell
phone
payments. I strongly agreed with
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assumption. In
this
eassy
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,
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will
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debate
, why am agree and why some individuals might be not happy with
this
advancement. To commence with, in
this
modern era, everyone
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convenient life and
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modern
moderen
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modern
technology can provide us
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facilities in every field of life .The main reason some people and
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also
want to
purchasing
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a lot of things in daily life and if we have a
card
and
cell
phone
so
thad
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that
we can easily buy everything via
card
and
cell
phone
rather than
cash
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put in
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for shopping.
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, if
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was out of
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and
i
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had not any cash and
i
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need
purchases
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any thing
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urgently and
i
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had a bank account so
than
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i
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can
purchased
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anything very conveniently with
cell
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phone
.
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,
i
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think it is
perfect
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way to use money.
Furthermore
. Pouring some light on those people who
does
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not like purchasing thing online. The reason is that they can not use
cell
phone
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phones
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and
card
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.
Therefore
, they run out
from
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this
method They feel easy
yourself
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apply
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with cash shopping
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,
such
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as old generation those are uneducated and they didn't know how
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to
tu
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to
purchased
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anything
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any thing
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anything
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via
card
and
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or
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cell
phone
Likewise
, it would be hard for them. In conclusion,
i
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think in future every payment
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will
wil
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will
replace
on
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apply
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card
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cards
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and
cell
phones because
this
is
very
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convenient way for everyone
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  • digital payments
  • convenient
  • efficiency
  • reduce crime
  • tangibility
  • privacy
  • limited access to technology
  • job losses
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