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We have long imagined the possibility that life exists on other planets. Do you believe that there is life in the universe outside of earth? What would be the implications of proving that alien life exists? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.

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As of today, many researchers have been conducting their own
researches
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, with a meagre amount of conclusions as to whether or not there is
life
 on other planets. I, personally, am of the belief that there most certainly is
life
, outside the biomes, and the world we are aware of. The space research stations are in constant search for proof of
life
,
for instance
, the presence of water on the moon, or the
foot prints
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 located on
mars
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, that nowhere near resembled that of any known being on our planet. It would be a matter of major
scientefic
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scientific
 concern, an impressively large gateway to an
ablsolute
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absolute
 plethora of possibilities, experiments in every field, be it science,
or
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geographic, or even historical, could be carried out. But
then
 again, there is little clue as to the
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 animosity, the
competetion
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competition
, the act of
coexistance
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coexistence
, what that may cause. The whole scenario will depend on these factors, with a possibility of peaceful
cohabilitation
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cohabitation
, it may be delightful, the mutual understanding, again, causing a major uproar in every great way there could be but
conversely
, any minor dissonance may lead to disasters, inter-planetary problems not being one of our plus points. On balance, it remains inconclusive, the mere presence of
life
, their reaction to ours, and the whole situation
that is
 to follow.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • vastness
  • statistical probability
  • habitable planets
  • Drake Equation
  • extremophiles
  • hydrothermal vents
  • monumental
  • resilience
  • adaptability
  • philosophical
  • human-centric viewpoints
  • interstellar
  • cosmos
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