You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.  The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday. ielts-academic-task-1-coffee-shop-sales Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

 The table below shows the sales made by a coffee shop in an office building on a typical weekday.

ielts-academic-task-1-coffee-shop-sales

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
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The table illustrates the proportion of
sales
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of (
coffee
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, tea, pastries, and sandwiches) made by a
coffee
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shop in an office building on a weekday from 7:30 in the morning to 8:30 in the evening. Regarding drinks, the table shows the high
sales
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for
coffee
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were 265 from 7:30-10:30, and
this
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amount gradually decreased between 10:30-2:30 and 2:30-5:30 from 185 to 145 respectively, and
this
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number rose to 200 in 5:30-8:30.
In contrast
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, tea
sales
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show the less than
coffee
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at the same period.
Whereas
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starting with 110 from 7:30 to 10:30, dropping to 50 from 10:30-2:30, steadily decreasing to 35 from 2:30 to 5:30, and slightly increasing to 75 from 5:30 to 8:30.
On the other hand
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, pastries show the highest
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, 275 and 150, in the early morning, from 7:30 to 10:30 and from 2:30 to 5:30, respectively,
while
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the lowest
sales
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are 80 from 5:30 to 8:30. On the opposite, sandwiches recorded the highest
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200 and 110 from 10:30 to 2:30 and from 5:30 to 8:30 respectively.
In addition
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, the lowest 40 was between 2:30 and 5:30.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Vocabulary: Replace the words sales, coffee with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "shows" was used 3 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • time slots
  • weekday
  • peak hours
  • trends
  • patterns
  • product categories
  • sales volume
  • morning rush
  • lunchtime
  • afternoon
  • evening
  • popular items
  • total sales
  • comparative analysis
  • sales trends
  • sales distribution
  • highlight
  • potential reasons
  • noteworthy
  • noticeable peaks
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