The charts below show the percentage of food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. The graph shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants and sit-down restaurants.

The charts below show the percentage of food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. The graph shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants and sit-down restaurants.
The pie charts and the line graph show information about,
proportion
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the proportion
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of food budget spent on
restaurant
meals
versus home cooking, and
also
, how many
meals
eaten
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are eaten
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in
fast-food
restaurants
versus sit-down
restaurants
in (1980,1990,2000 and 2010).
Overall
, The pie charts
shows
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the lowest budget spent on
restaurant
meals
before increased to half in 2010.
While
the line graph shows, the
charp
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sharp
increasing in the number of
meals
eaten in the
fast-food
restaurants
. The pie charts illustrate, the lowest
changed
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change
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in
percentage
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the percentage
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of food budget spent on
restaurant
meals
. In 1980, the percentage was 10%, after 10 tears, become 15%, in 2000, shows
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a slightly
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slightly
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increase
to 35%. In 2010, spent on
restaurants
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restaurant
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meals
has the same percentage
of
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as
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home cooking 50%.
On the other hand
,
the
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apply
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fast-food
meals
and sit-down
restaurants
,
starting
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started
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in
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at
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the same level with 20
meals
/per
year
in 1980. After that, sit-down
restaurant
meals
, increased to almost 35
meals
/per
yearin
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year in
year
1990,
while
fast-food
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fast food
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has gradually
increase
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increased
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near
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to
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by 29
meals
/per
year
at
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in
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the same period.
After
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From
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1990 to 2000. there
were
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was
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a sharp
increase
of
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in
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fast-food
meals
from 29 to 55
meals
/per
year
,
while
sit-down
restaurants
has
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apply
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increase
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increased
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withe
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with
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45
meals
/per
year
. After 10 years,
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fast food
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fast-food
reach almost 85
meals
/per
year
,
comparing
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compared
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with sit-down
restaurants
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restaurant
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meals
,
that
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which
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has slightly
increase
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increased
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to 50
meals
/per
year
.
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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words restaurant, meals, fast-food, restaurants, increase, year with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "show" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 7 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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