The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in Europe country between 1979 and 2004.

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in Europe country between 1979 and 2004.
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The graph illustrates the amount of utilisation of fish,
chicken
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,
lamb
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and beef by the European population between the years 1979 to 2004. The unit represents
grams
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.
Overall
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, the consumption of
chicken
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witnessed an increase.
Whereas
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,
lamb
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together with
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beef accounted for a downward trend.
Although
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, the use of fish recorded a decline slightly. Looking at the details, the using of
chicken
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and
lamb
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equally accounted for 150
grams
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initially
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but the eating of
chicken
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climbed dramatically
while
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the
lamb
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stepped down slowly and reached 250 or 70
grams
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respectively
at the end
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.
However
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, beef purchased peaked in 1984 and after ,
this
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it dropped considerably to almost 120
grams
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in 2004.  As can be seen,the sale of fish slightly decreased after 1979 to stand at 60
grams
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and have stable at 50
grams
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throughout the observed years.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words chicken, lamb, grams with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.
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