The pie charts below show the comparison different kinds of energy production in France in 1995 and 2005.

The pie charts below show the comparison different kinds of energy production in France in 1995 and 2005.
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The charts provide information on how
energy
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was produced in France by different resources in the years 1995 and 2005.
Overall
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, coal contributed the most to
energy
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production in those two time periods.
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, looking at coal, there is a slight increase in its usage over the years, from 29.80% to 30.93%.
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, people in France used more gas in 2005, with an increase of 0.68%, from just under a third of
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production to slightly over a third. Coal and gas, together, made up just over three-fifths of the
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generation in 2005.
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, looking at the remaining resources, Petro showed a declining trend, from 29.27% in 1995 to 19.55%.
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, Nuclear illustrated a marginal demand in 2005, rising from 6.40% in 1995 to 10.10% in 2005. For the other types, they
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had a significant demand, increasing from 4.90% in 1995 to 9.10% in 2005.
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