Some people believe government should spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think that building more and wider roads is the better way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some individuals believed that the government should invest more money in building

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trains and subway

systems

, in order to reduce the

rate

of

traffic

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,

while

others thought that

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new and wider

roads

is a more effective way of reducing

traffic

congestion

. In my opinion,

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some new

roads

will help combat the

rate

of

traffic

jam

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and will discuss the advantages of building trains and

subway

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,

as well as

the merits of building more and wider

roads

.

Firstly

, when trains and subways are made, they can help in reducing the number of

people

utilizing the

roads

.

Consequently

, reducing the

rate

at which there will be

congestions

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on the highway.

For instance

, It has been observed that developed countries like the USA hardly suffer from

such

problems,

this

is because they have many

railway

systems

which are being used effectively by the citizens, leading to few figures for

people

on the

road

.

However

in undeveloped countries like Nigeria, where there are very few numbers of available

railway

stations and

train

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, many residents suffer on a daily basis, consuming more hours on the

road

.

On the other hand

, the introduction of

railway

systems

will help to reduce the

rate

of

congestion

on the

road

. In fact, adding some new

roads

with wider space will be the best solution for tackling

this

road

congestion

problem, as

this

will help to curtail the

rate

at which

traffic

jam

occurs in the whole country.

Therefore

, with a limited amount of space available on the

roads

, which accommodates fewer numbers of vehicles, there tends to be

congestions

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congestion

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on the

road

. As more and more motors try to force their way out, thereby leading to a disorganized

road

and more accidents occurrence.

For instance

, in places like Onitsha, Anambra state, where they only have small and narrow

roads

, it has been noticed that

people

spend about 4 hours on the

road

, on a journey

that is

not supposed to be more than 30-40 minutes.

This

is because their

roads

are so small to accommodate more

people

, thereby leading to the

road

being

jam packed

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. When wider

roads

are built, there will be free movement of vehicles and fewer hours spent on the

road

, leading to a stress-free life for the citizens. In conclusion,

while

some suggest that

railway

systems

should be built as

this

will help to reduce the number of

people

and vehicles on the

road

. In my view, if new and wider

roads

can be made,

this

will be the best solution to the reduction of

traffic

congestion

.