Some people believe government should spend money on building train and subway lines to reduce traffic congestion. Others think that building more and wider roads is the better way to reduce traffic congestion. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Some individuals believed that the government should invest more money in building

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trains and subway

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, in order to reduce the

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of

traffic

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others thought that

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more

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new and wider

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is a more effective way of reducing

traffic

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congestion

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. In my opinion,

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some new

roads

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will help combat the

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of

traffic

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jam

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and will discuss the advantages of building trains and

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as well as

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the merits of building more and wider

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, when trains and subways are made, they can help in reducing the number of

people

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utilizing the

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, reducing the

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at which there will be

congestions

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on the highway.

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, It has been observed that developed countries like the USA hardly suffer from

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problems,

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is because they have many

railway

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systems

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which are being used effectively by the citizens, leading to few figures for

people

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on the

road

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.

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in undeveloped countries like Nigeria, where there are very few numbers of available

railway

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stations and

train

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, many residents suffer on a daily basis, consuming more hours on the

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.

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, the introduction of

railway

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systems

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will help to reduce the

rate

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of

congestion

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on the

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. In fact, adding some new

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with wider space will be the best solution for tackling

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road

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congestion

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problem, as

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will help to curtail the

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at which

traffic

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occurs in the whole country.

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, with a limited amount of space available on the

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, which accommodates fewer numbers of vehicles, there tends to be

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on the

road

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. As more and more motors try to force their way out, thereby leading to a disorganized

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and more accidents occurrence.

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, in places like Onitsha, Anambra state, where they only have small and narrow

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, it has been noticed that

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spend about 4 hours on the

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, on a journey

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not supposed to be more than 30-40 minutes.

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is because their

roads

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are so small to accommodate more

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, thereby leading to the

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being

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jam packed

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. When wider

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are built, there will be free movement of vehicles and fewer hours spent on the

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, leading to a stress-free life for the citizens. In conclusion,

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some suggest that

railway

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systems

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should be built as

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will help to reduce the number of

people

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and vehicles on the

road

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. In my view, if new and wider

roads

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can be made,

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will be the best solution to the reduction of

traffic

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congestion

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.