Your local public library wants to make improvements to there services & facilities. In order to get ideas from the public, they have asked library users to send them suggestions in writing. Write a letter to librarian in your letter - describe what you like about the library - say what you don't like - make suggessions for improvements

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love the fact that it is vast and filled with so many knowledgeable books because every time
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have a project,
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go into the library to make a research,
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always find useful information in the books, articles and newspapers that helps me exceed my expectations for the project.
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, articles and newspapers are worn out and old, which makes it difficult to find useful information in good time. I would like to suggest that we migrate to an E-Library where everything about accessing the great well of knowledge is computerized. The books, newspapers and articles can be scanned, saved and stored in computer systems for easier access or better still the Ebooks can be sought after and downloaded on the computers.
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, I am certain that it would give people in the community an edge to being more conversant with technological advancements and boost their use of technology for research. Thank you.
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The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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