Many people argue that restaurants should be required to disclose the nutritional information of the dishes they serve. Do the advantage of this outweigh the disadvantage?

Certain groups of people assert that restaurants have the obligation to publish the nutritional

information

of each meal they provide.

While

this

information

can aid

costomers

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customers

in their

diet

control, I still think that it will

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negative effects. Nutritional

information

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essential data for individuals who are on a

diet

to calculate their calories, it will be considerably helpful if restaurants supply

this

information

. For individuals, providing

such

information

on each dish saves them

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amount of time.

For example

, people who are on a calorie-controlled

diet

need to record each meal’s ingredient, in order to analyze how much exercise they have to complete

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or when to take the next meal. Surprisingly,

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a lot of time and people occasionally give up on math first rather than

diet

control.

Consequently

, with

this

policy, restaurants not only provide

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nutritional

information

but

also

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convenience.

However

, providing nutritional

information

for each meal can cause

costomers

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customers

to be too concerned about their own health and less about the food they like.

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is the

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peripheral

importance in ordering, the priority

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to be the meal in the restaurant. Showing nutritional

information

on the menu provokes them

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certain meals, which is not a good phenomenon. Taiwanese take

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very

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, previously, there is a short period of time

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they over-concentrated on ingredients

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caused depression illness. Despite health

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important for human beings, these extended problems led to a

negetive

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negative

impact. In conclusion, offering nutritional

information

will

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with severe effects, so I believe that in

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situation the disadvantage

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the advantage.

This

adjustment is not necessary.