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Many people argue that restaurants should be required to disclose the nutritional information of the dishes they serve. Do the advantage of this outweigh the disadvantage?

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Certain groups of people assert that restaurants have the obligation to publish the nutritional
information
 of each meal they provide.
While
this
information
 can aid
costomers
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customers
 in their
diet
 control, I still think that it will
aaccompanying
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accompanying
a accompanying
 negative effects. Nutritional
information
 is
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essential data for individuals who are on a
diet
 to calculate their calories, it will be considerably helpful if restaurants supply
this
information
. For individuals, providing
such
information
 on each dish saves them
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 amount of time.
For example
, people who are on a calorie-controlled
diet
 need to record each meal’s ingredient, in order to analyze how much exercise they have to complete
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or when to take the next meal. Surprisingly,
this
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 a lot of time and people occasionally give up on math first rather than
diet
 control.
Consequently
, with
this
 policy, restaurants not only provide
nutrutional
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nutritional
information
 but
also
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 convenience.
However
, providing nutritional
information
 for each meal can cause
costomers
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customers
 to be too concerned about their own health and less about the food they like.
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 is the
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peripheral
 importance in ordering, the priority
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 to be the meal in the restaurant. Showing nutritional
information
 on the menu provokes them
avoiding
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 certain meals, which is not a good phenomenon. Taiwanese take
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 very
serious
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, previously, there is a short period of time
that
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 they over-concentrated on ingredients
and
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 caused depression illness. Despite health
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 important for human beings, these extended problems led to a
negetive
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negative
 impact. In conclusion, offering nutritional
information
 will
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 with severe effects, so I believe that in
this
 situation the disadvantage
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 the advantage.
This
 adjustment is not necessary.
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