The chart shows the proportion of working age adults in four countries from 1960 to 2050. Units are given in percentages. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart shows the proportion of working age adults in four countries from 1960 to 2050.  Units are given in percentages.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart depicts the proportion of
adults
of working
age
in four countries, France, the United States,
Japan
and
Germany
, over a
90 year
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period. Taken as a whole, the
working
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age
population of all four countries peaked between 1990 and 2000, before showing a projected decline to 2050. Though
Japan
and
Germany
had the highest numbers of working-
age
adults
in the 1990s, both are forecast to have the lowest by 2050,
while
the United States and France will have the highest. With regard to
Japan
and
Germany
, both had
working
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age
populations at over 65% in 1960.
Whereas
Germany’s
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Germany
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initially
dips slightly, their proportions of working
adults
peaked in unison at seventy
percent
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by 1990, before showing a projected decline to 52% for
Japan
and 55% for
Germany
by 2050.
Similarly
, the percentage of
adults
under the
age
of retirement in the United States and France showed a gradual increase from around 60% for both in 1960 to reaching a peak of over 65% by 1980. Over the next 30 years, each displayed slight fluctuations before being predicted to decline steadily to 60% and 55% respectively by the period's end.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words adults, age, japan, germany with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "decline" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "slightly" was used 2 times.

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