The charts below show comparisons of different kinds of energy production in France in 1995 and 2005.

The charts below show comparisons of different kinds of energy production in France in 1995 and 2005.
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The pie charts illustrate the difference between various
energy
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sources in France in 1995 and 2005.
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, it is readily apparent that coal and gas were equally popular during the whole period,
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the use of petrol and nuclear experienced some changes between given years. With regards to the first graph, the sector with the highest percentage was coal, at 29,80%, followed by gas, at 29,63%. Petrol was in
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third place with 29,27%,
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nuclear
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type of
energy
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made up only 6,40% in 1995. Over a ten-year period, two previous leaders kept their positions and slightly raised by approximately 1%,
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petrol became less common in France and decreased almost by 10%.
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, the percentage of nuclear
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is witnessed the most significant raise (from 6,40% to 10,10%) The charts below show comparisons of different kinds of
energy
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production in France in 1995 and 2005.
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