The world’s natural resources such as oil, forests, and freshwater are being consumed at an ever-increasing rate. What are the dangers of the situation? what can be done to solve the problem?

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debate on
overuse
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the overuse
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of natural
source
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by people that leads to serious problems in future. there
are
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number
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of serious hazards of
this
situation but we can
adress
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address
this
issue by implying some
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necessary
solution
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.
this
essay will
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elaborate
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problems will create by
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solution
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to overcome
it
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them
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. there are many dangers
create
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by overusing natural
resource
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resources
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, first and foremost is global warming. people cut the forest for
indusrialisation
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industrialisation
industrialization
and to make
world
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more modern but because of deforestation there will be a higher chance of
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of
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carbon
emission
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and that leads to global warming and polluted air.
in addition
, another reason is there will be no freshwater for humans in future.
water
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a neccesity
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neccesity
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necessity
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human beings ,
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and overuse
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of freshwater may lead to drought. Other than that without
water
soil
will
also
damaged .
fruitfullness
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fruitfulness
of
soil
will go away that
results
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in
soil
irosion
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erosion
.
moreover
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disturbance in animal
habitat
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habitats
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might results in less rainfall and
ecosystem
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the ecosystem
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will disrupt. there are
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a plethora
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of solutions that might solve the problems. both government and
individual
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individuals
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together can solve the issue. government should do campaigns about
awarness
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awareness
about
dangers
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the dangers
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of
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the overuse
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of natural
resource
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resources
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and
importance
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the importance
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of planting
trees
. planting more
trees
leads to
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animal
habitat
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habitats
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and
decrease
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a decrease
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in global warming that ultimately results in balance in
water
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the water
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cycle of
ecosystem
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the ecosystem
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. what is more ,
individual
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individuals
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can limit the
unneccesery
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unnecessary
use of
water
.
goverments
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governments
government
should make more storage
water
that comes from rainfall.
limit
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the over
agriculture
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activity in certain areas may prevent
soil
from damaging.
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goveernment
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government
should make
the
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law that strict action will be taken who cut the
trees
and
fine
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will be conducted
from
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those who waste
water
unnessiserily .
to conclude
, there are
hazardious
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hazardous
effects from
overuse
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the overuse
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of natural resources like global warming and shortage of freshwater but we can prevent that to happen by planting more
trees
and
limit
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limiting
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the
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apply
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water
usage.
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