You went to the local hospital’s Emergency Department with your young child, who had severe stomach pains. You had to wait for almost four hours before your daughter was treated by a doctor and, while you were waiting, you were constantly ignored by the other staff. Write a letter to the Registrar, complaining about the service you received.
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Dear sir,
I am writing
this
letter to, share my awful experience at our local hospital on 5th August 2023.
I, Harsh, living in Kingston since the year 2021. Moreover
, Kingston general hospital ranked in the top 5 among other facilities in Ontario. However
, my younger daughter suffered from severe stomach pain hence
, I bring her to the hospital for a further
checkup. In addition
, when I reached the reception desk, they did not respond to my query. I was so anxious thus
, I went to the paramedic's cabin but no one is available. Besides
, nurses ignored my daughter's situation hence
, I felt helpless. After four hours, one paediatrician diagnosed her and it was a severe viral infection.
According to
the doctor, if she will get some treatment before 2 hours, there will be no need to admit her to a nursing home. Additionally
, I request you take appropriate steps against the staff members of the hospital. Also
, I would request you to monitor all activities by doing an inspection in
several intervals.
Looking forward to seeing prompt action.
Yours faithfully,
Harsh TrivediChange preposition
at
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