The table below shows the percentages of moblie phone owners using various mobile phone features from 2006 to 2010.

The table below shows the percentages of moblie phone owners using various mobile phone features from 2006 to 2010.
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The table compares the percentages of people using different functions of their mobile
phones
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between 2006 and 2010. Throughout the period shown, the main reason why people used their mobile
phones
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was to make calls.
However
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, there was a marked increase in the popularity of other mobile phone features, particularly the Internet search feature. In 2006, 100% of mobile phone owners used their
phones
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to make calls,
while
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the next most popular functions were text messaging (73%) and taking photos (66%).
By contrast
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, less than 20% of owners played games or music on their
phones
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, and there were no figures for users doing Internet searches or recording
video
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. Over the following 4 years, there was relatively little change in the figures for the top three mobile phone features.
However
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, the percentage of people using their
phones
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to access the Internet jumped to 41% in 2008 and
then
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to 73% in 2010. There was
also
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a significant rise in the use of mobiles to play games and to record video, with figures reaching 41% and 35% respectively in 2010.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words phones with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "percentages" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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