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The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.

The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
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The bar chart compares the percentages of Australian
men
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 and women doing regular physical activity in six
age
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 categories in the year 2010.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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 the rank first of doing regular exercise allocates to
females
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 in all
age
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 groups,
while
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 in
ages
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 15 to 24, males stand first.
Moreover
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, the proportion of males and
females
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 doing exercise regularly is almost the same in
ages
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 65 and above. In the
ages
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 15 to 24, the figure for
men
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 who exercise regularly was 52.8% and stood at first rank,
while
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 that for
females
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 had little difference by a narrow margin of 5%.
In addition
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, with increasing
age
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, the percentage of
men
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 who are doing physical activity regularly decreased to 39.5%,
however
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 after the
age
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 of 44, it increased slightly. There was the biggest disparity in the figure for males and
females
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 in
ages
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 35 to 44 with 12% and in
this
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 group, the figure for women was more than
men
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.
Furthermore
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, the highest share among
age
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 groups consisted of
females
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 who are 45 to 54 years old with 53.3%. Needless to say, the share of
men
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 and female doing physical activity constituted approximately the same with about 47%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words men, age, females, ages with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "stand" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Physical activity
  • Regular exercise
  • Age demographics
  • Participation rate
  • Trend analysis
  • Gender disparity
  • Health initiatives
  • Public health policies
  • Statistical comparison
  • Lifestyle choices
  • Work commitments
  • Age-related factors
  • Preventative health
  • Exercise habits
  • Surveillance data
  • Motivators and barriers
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