The bar chart below shows the percentage of Australian men and women in different age groups who did regular physical activity in 2010.
The bar chart compares the percentages of Australian
men
and women doing regular physical activity in six age
categories in the year 2010.
Overall
, it is clear that
the rank first of doing regular exercise allocates to females
in all age
groups, while
in ages
15 to 24, males stand first. Moreover
, the proportion of males and females
doing exercise regularly is almost the same in ages
65 and above.
In the ages
15 to 24, the figure for men
who exercise regularly was 52.8% and stood at first rank, while
that for females
had little difference by a narrow margin of 5%. In addition
, with increasing age
, the percentage of men
who are doing physical activity regularly decreased to 39.5%, however
after the age
of 44, it increased slightly.
There was the biggest disparity in the figure for males and females
in ages
35 to 44 with 12% and in this
group, the figure for women was more than men
. Furthermore
, the highest share among age
groups consisted of females
who are 45 to 54 years old with 53.3%. Needless to say, the share of men
and female doing physical activity constituted approximately the same with about 47%.Submitted by behzad.tahmouresi on
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