The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

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The given pie charts compare the average proportion of existing

sodium

, saturated fat, and added

sugar

in the daily meals of American people.

Overall

, American people use the highest proportion of daily-consumed

sodium

and saturated fat in their dinners,

while

the highest amount of added

sugar

is used with their snacks. It is evident that in the USA, people consume a considerable percentage of daily-used

sodium

and saturated fat with their dinner, at 43% and 35%, respectively.

In addition

, only 23% of daily consumption of added

sugar

is with

this

meal. If we look at the figures for American's breakfast, it can be seen that it is more healthy, compared to the other three meals, having between 14% to 16% of all of these unhealthy nutrients. Looking at daily snacks, the biggest share of daily-eaten added

sugar

is consumed with that, at 42%. In terms of a typical lunch in the United States of America, the amount of saturated fat and

sodium

comprising the meal account for 26% and 19% of their daily usage, respectively.

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The charts below show the average percentages in typical meals of three types of nutrients, all of which may be unhealthy if eaten too much. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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