The Bar graph below shows the Expenditure in Million Pounds on fast food items by income groups in the UK in 1990.
The Bar graph below shows the expenditure in
Million
Pounds
on fast food items by income
groups in the UK including hamburger
, fish and Fix the agreement mistake
hamburgers
chips
, pizza
Overall
, hamburger
the famous for Fix the agreement mistake
hamburgers
people
with high income
and average income
. Whrease
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Whereas
chips
were people
with low income
bought the most
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the most expensed Unnecessary verb
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hamburger
people
with high income
spend lot
of money on Change the article
a lot
hamburger
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hamburgers
with
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apply
million
pounds
. Next,
people
with high income
spend about 35 million
pounds
on hamburger
. In Fix the agreement mistake
hamburgers
constract
, Correct your spelling
contrast
people
with low income
spend about 15 million
pounds
on hamburger
. With regard to fish and Fix the agreement mistake
hamburgers
chips
people
with average income
spend 25 million
pounds
on fish and chips
. Meanwhile, people
with high income
and low income
spend about 15 million
pounds
About pizza people
with high income
spend about 20 million
pounds
. People
with average income
spend half of Correct your spelling
people
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people
income
while
people
low
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with low
income
spend ⅓ of people
with average
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an average
the average
income
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