Mrs Barret, an English-speaking woman who lives in your town, has advertised fro someone to help her in her home for a few hours a day next summer. Write a letter to Mrs Barret. In your letter - Suggest how you could help her in her home - Say why you would liek to do this work - Explain when you will and will not be available

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Dear Mrs Barret, I am writing to you in reference to the advertisement you posted for a part-time domestic helper. I believe I am a suitable candidate for that job. I am handy in various household chores,

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, laundry, cooking and cleaning. I am

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good at taking care of toddlers and pets.

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, outdoor works like lawn-mowing and gardening are my favourites. Since I am a working student and have a two-month-long semester break next summer, I wish to use

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time as an opportunity to earn some extra money to support my education.

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, I have similar work experiences from the past and genuinely love doing

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tasks, making me an ideal candidate for the job. I would like to let you know about my availability. I will be available throughout the weekdays, Monday to Friday, from early morning to mid-afternoon. I am scheduled to attend a training class related to my study during evening hours,

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will be unavailable for work. As for weekends, I will have to spend them doing my class assignments and having some downtime. Should you need any more information, please contact me directly on my cellphone. I hope to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully, Sam Johns

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

207 words

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