You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie charts show the electricity generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewables in the year 2009. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The pie charts show the electricity generated in Germany and France from all sources and renewables in the year 2009.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

Write at least 150 words.
These pie charts illustrate, the proportion of the electricity generated in Garmany and French from all
types
of sources and
renewables
in the year 2009.
Overall
, the percentage of
renewables
among all
types
was not high significantly in both countries,
while
the main part of renewable energy was different from each other. Focusing on Germany's Electricity Generation, Conventional Thermal accounted for the largest part of all
types
of resources at 59.6%. The per cent of
renewables
was the smallest at 17.4%, and the relative number of biomass and wind energy made up over half among them, at 39.3% and 36.9%, respectively. Turning to France's Electricity generation, the majority of resources
was
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nuclear, accounting for 76%, and
renewables
was
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following
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followed
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to
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nuclear at 13. 7% among all
types
. The percentage of hydroelectric was higher than any others, recording 80.5%.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words types, renewables with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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