You have recently opened a store and want to have a website for this store. One of your friends can help you with this. Write a letter to the friend to ask him/her to develop a website for your newly-opened store. In your letter: · tell what your store or business sells · mention how you would want your website to look · provide some ideas on how you would like to keep your website updated Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Krunal I haven't heard you for ages. I have opened one store with the help of friends and family. I would like to create an internet site for my store. I want your help to build a domain for my business as you are an expert website developer. first of all, I have opened a gold-silver jewellery showroom in the market.

however

, we have sold many types of jewellery like earrings, rings, gold watches, and necklaces. we have

also

added diamond jewellery

due to

the customer's requests. I want my webpage to look attractive with all separate sections for different merchandise and

also

use new tools for a website. I have one idea to add 3D features so the customer can easily try them out at home and purchase them online hope you understand and I will be waiting for your reply. yours faithfully Priyank

Submitted by priyankkumarswadas on Wed Aug 09 2023

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‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

146 words

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