The diagram illustrates the process that is used to manufacture bricks for the building industry.
The plan provides information about the production of
bricks
used for building purposes.
Looking from the overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that the process is complex and consists of six different stages, moreover
, a lot of equipment should be used in order to achieve the desired product.
With regards to the first three steps, to receive some mental grid a digger obviously is needed, then
a roller brings the mass to the place, where some water and sand is added. The next stage can vary, therefore
bricks
could be mould or wire cutters.
After the production of bricks
they should be left in a driving oven for 24-48 hours. Add a comma
,bricks
Also
, the temperature is a significant factor in a great result and should be moderate (200 degrees -980 degrees)in the beginning and high (800-1300) in the middle. After that, the material should be put in a cooling chamber for at least 48 hours. Finally
, manufactured bricks
are ready to be packed and delivery can be realised.Submitted by sofsya.fedorenko.2001 on
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