The charts below show the percentage of food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. The graph shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants and sit-down restaurants. The charts below show the percentage of food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. The graph shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants and sit-down restaurants.

The charts below show the percentage of food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. The graph shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants and sit-down restaurants.

The charts below show the percentage of food budget the average family spent on restaurant meals in different years. The graph shows the number of meals eaten in fast food restaurants and sit-down restaurants.
The pie charts and the line graph show information about the proportion of
food
budget spent on
restaurant
meals
versus home cooking, and how many
meals
are eaten in
fast-
food
restaurants
versus sit-down
restaurants
(1980,1990,2000, and 2010). The pie charts show the lowest budget spent on
restaurant
meals
before it increased to half in 2010. The line graph shows a sharp increase in the number of
meals
eaten in
fast-
food
restaurants
. The pie charts illustrate the lowest change in the percentage of the
food
budget spent on
restaurant
meals
. In 1980, the rate was 10%. After ten tears, it became 15%, in 2000, shows a slight increase to 35%. In 2010, spent on
restaurant
meals
had the same percentage of home cooking, 50%.
On the other hand
,
fast-
food
and sit-down
restaurants
started at the same level with 20
meals
/per
year
in 1980. After that, sit-down
restaurant
meals
increased to almost 35
meals
/per
year
in 1990,
while
fast
food
gradually increased to 29
meals
/per
year
in the same period. From 1990 to 2000. there was a sharp increase in
fast-
food
meals
from 29 to 55
meals
/per
year
,
while
sit-down
restaurants
increased to 45
meals
/per
year
. After ten years, fast
food
reached almost 85
meals
/per
year
, compared with sit-down
restaurant
meals
, which has slightly increased to 50
meals
/per
year
.
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