The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The two pie charts below show the marital status of the populations of Canada and Australia.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
These two given
pie
charts illustrate the marriage status of
the
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Canadian and Australian citizens.
Overall
, married individuals and separated but not divorce
people
occupied the first and second rank respectively in
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the Australia
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Australia
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Australian
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pie
chart
,
conversely
, these two groups are seen in reverse order in Canada's
chart
.
According to
Canada's
pie
chart
, citizens who preferred not to divorce and just live separately occupied the biggest fraction at 53% in
this
chart
and married
people
are the second majority population among
Canadian
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Canadians
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. the fractions that belong to widowed and
never married
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people
are identical at 7%.
Furthermore
, the
people
who had a
same sex
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same-sex
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marriage or divorced have the lowest rank in
this
chart
respectively. Moving into Australia's population
pie
chart
,
while
the dwellers who got married and separated without divorce are two sizeable
majority
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in
this
society at 46% and 41% respectively, the three other groups of Australian citizens, namely widowed, single and divorced are the three tiny minorities in
this
country.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words pie, people, chart with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Only 3 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 7 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • marital status
  • population
  • pie charts
  • percentage
  • categories
  • Married
  • Single
  • Divorced
  • Widowed
  • distribution
  • noticeable trends
  • comparison
  • significantly different
  • similarities
  • striking differences
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